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My Beautiful Wife


Curled up next to me
Her head on my shoulder
She is so beautiful

Hair tied up
In a messy pile
On her head.
Fingers still pruny
From washing the dishes.
No makeup
On her face.
She is so beautiful.

Her skin glowing
After the scrub
She gave it.
Smell of her perfume
Still intoxicating.
Hair so soft
Against my skin.
She is so beautiful.

Tears stream down her face
I tighten my arms around her
And kiss the top of her head
As I wipe away the tears
She is so beautiful.
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(Just to clear things up, I am an unmarried straight girl.)

Written from the perspective of a married guy. This is what I wish guys would think, I guess. Maybe some of them do. I think this is what all girls would want their man to be like. I know I do.

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:iconpurpleginger:
i really like how this all flows together. its quite pretty.
:iconjnarochel17:
Thanks!! :)

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92% of the teenage population has switched to rap. If you are one of the 8% who ROCKS, be sure to smash a guitar over the head of someone in the 92 percentile.

Broken hearts cannot be healed with duct tape.
:iconpurpleginger:
you've been featured!
:iconjnarochel17:
What does that mean?

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92% of the teenage population has switched to rap. If you are one of the 8% who ROCKS, be sure to smash a guitar over the head of someone in the 92 percentile.

Broken hearts cannot be healed with duct tape.
:iconpurpleginger:
your poem is in my journal...so other people can read it!
:iconjnarochel17:
Oh, wow! That's great! Thank you so much!!! =) :heart:

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92% of the teenage population has switched to rap. If you are one of the 8% who ROCKS, be sure to smash a guitar over the head of someone in the 92 percentile.

Broken hearts cannot be healed with duct tape.

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